Unit 11: Unity and Coherence Tasks

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Unity

Essays that lack of unity make no sense and everything will look messy

page 79 - Next time, Try Chinese Medicine

Topic: Chinese medicine
Thesis statement= 2 lines
Topic sentence= 1 line
Supporting ideas

How the topic sentence relates to the thesis statement

The philosophy of modern medicine/chinese medicine is also said in the thesis statement.

Type of essay: Argumentative - Contrasting Chinese and traditional medicine

Type of organisation: Block organisation

Unity: Yes

Coherence

Ideas that are arranged in an good order in an essay.
You will need Transitions, Pronoun reference and repetition of key nouns or ideas in order to achieve cohesion.

Chapter 2.3 Cohesion

2.1

La Ferrera  - she

New businesses - they

average life of only 4.7 years - This

one economic - the former

one social - the latter

the former...the latter - These


4.1

a) he
b) his
c) his
d) it or this
e) his
f) he
g) they
h) This